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An unhappy thing of me
发布日期 : 2016-05-23浏览次数 : 来源 :
习作要求：
如今，全世界都在倡导环保。你们的学校也加入到这个行列中来，老师号召同学们骑自行车上学。可是，有部分家长坚持反对，认为骑自行车浪费时间，甚至觉得很丢人。请你就此内容写一篇80词左右的短文。
学生习作：
An unhappy thing of me
Most students ride bikes to school. That looks interesting and the students can also do exercise. I like sports and it can relaxed ① me, and I will be in good health. But my parents don’t agree with me at all. They think that will make them lose faces ② and waste my time if I ride a bike to school. But my view is different from theirs. They always decide everything for me! They are so pushy. I’m unhappy now. Their eyes ③ are narrow. I think I’m right. I like riding to school! Please help me!改错：
① relaxed应改为relax。can为情态动词，其后应接动词原形。
② them lose faces应改为others laugh at them。原句是汉语式的表达方法，应用laugh at来表达此意。③ eyes应改为thoughts。想表达做法，观点之意时，应用thought来表达。