习作要求:
怎样才能安排好自己的日常生活,保持身体健康?请以“My healthy lifestyle”为题,写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。
学生习作:
My healthy lifestyle
Do you like outdoor activities? Do you have a healthy lifestyle? Now I tell you my healthy lifestyle.
I’m an outgoing boy. I like playing the basketball①, and I usually play four times a week, I also like dancing very much. My eating habits are very good. I try to eat a lot of vegetables. I eat fruits② and drink milk every day. Of course, I like junk food, but I only eat it twice or three times a month. I sleep nine hours every day.
My healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades. Do you want to make progress every day? Please have a healthy lifestyle.
改错:
①应删掉the。玩球类应为“play+球类”。
② fruits改为fruit。fruit作为水果总称时,为不可数名词。