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My healthy lifestyle

发布日期 : 2016-05-23浏览次数 : 来源 :

习作要求:

  怎样才能安排好自己的日常生活,保持身体健康?请以“My healthy lifestyle”为题,写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。

学生习作:
My healthy lifestyle
 Do you like outdoor activities? Do you have a healthy lifestyle? Now I tell you my healthy lifestyle.
 I’m an outgoing boy. I like playing the basketball①, and I usually play four times a week, I also like dancing very much. My eating habits are very good. I try to eat a lot of vegetables. I eat  fruits② and drink milk every day. Of course, I like junk food, but I only eat it twice or three times a month. I sleep nine hours every day.
 My healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades. Do you want to make progress every day? Please have a healthy lifestyle.
改错:
  ①应删掉the。玩球类应为“play+球类”。
  ② fruits改为fruit。fruit作为水果总称时,为不可数名词。