My favourite cartoon

习作要求：

你喜欢看电影或动画吗？请把你最喜欢看的一个用英语写下来，让大家分享你的快乐。短文不少于80词。

学生习作：

My favourite cartoon

  Do you like cartoons? I enjoy them very much. Cartoons make me laugh and be in a good mood.

  Among the cartoons, I like Tom and Jerry best. It is about a lovely cat call Tom and a clever mouse call Jerry①. They live in the same house. Most of the time they fight to② each other. They fight for food, for something else, and even for nothing! How interesting they are!

  Jerry is very clever and he can always win. But Tom is poor. He always loses. This wonderful cartoon makes me know when we share the world with others we should be friendly to each other.

点评：

①    此句中两处call应改为called，是使用过去分词作后置定语的用法。

②    此处to应改为with，fight with结构表示“同……打架”。