Cycling

习作要求：
　　骑自行车作为一项环保、健康的运动越来越受到大家的喜爱，骑自行车可以锻炼我们的身体，但是我们在骑自行车的过程中应该注意些什么呢？请谈一谈你的看法，不少于80词。
学生习作：
   Cycling is more and more popular, because cycling can help us save energy and it doesn’t cause any pollution. If we want to keep safe, we should learn traffic rules in① the traffic station and obey them. You should never ride too fast. When we ride at night, we should have lights on the bike and wear light-colored clothes. Many young people like music. But you must shut② your MP3 and Walkman when you’re riding. Let’s share the cycling!
点评：
　　①此处应改为at。“在交通站”的表达为at the traffic station。
　　②此处应改为turn off。文章中表达关掉MP3和随身听应用turn off，shut一般表示关闭窗户。
总评：
　　本文线索明朗，主题突出，根据自己所掌握的知识，紧紧围绕Cycling展开论述，阐述了自行车运动的优点和应注意的问题，文章语句连贯，重点突出，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的习作。