写作指导
How I exercise?
发布日期 : 2016-06-28浏览次数 : 来源 :
习作要求：
假如你是胡志强，身体健壮。原因是经常锻炼，例如：早晨跑步、步行上学、每周踢足球等。请你根据此内容写一篇70词左右的文章。
学生习作：
In the morning, I always get up early. Then I do some running. It takes me about ten minutes. After breakfast, I walk to school. I don’t like② ride bikes. And I③ play the football twice a week in our school. In summer, I often swim in the swimming pool. I think it’s very interesting to swim.
Do you want to be healthy? Having sports can make your body strong. It can also give you more energy.
教师修改：
① to应改为for。be good to意为“对……友好”，be good for意为“对……有益”。
② ride应改为riding。like既可跟动词不定式，也可跟v-ing形式。like to do表示偶尔一次的爱好，like doing是长期性的爱好。
③ play the football应改为play football。play后加球类名词之前用冠词。
假如你是胡志强，身体健壮。原因是经常锻炼，例如：早晨跑步、步行上学、每周踢足球等。请你根据此内容写一篇70词左右的文章。
学生习作：
How I exercise?
My name is Hu zhiqiang. I am very strong because I often exercise. I think exercise is very good① to us.In the morning, I always get up early. Then I do some running. It takes me about ten minutes. After breakfast, I walk to school. I don’t like② ride bikes. And I③ play the football twice a week in our school. In summer, I often swim in the swimming pool. I think it’s very interesting to swim.
Do you want to be healthy? Having sports can make your body strong. It can also give you more energy.
教师修改：
① to应改为for。be good to意为“对……友好”，be good for意为“对……有益”。
② ride应改为riding。like既可跟动词不定式，也可跟v-ing形式。like to do表示偶尔一次的爱好，like doing是长期性的爱好。
③ play the football应改为play football。play后加球类名词之前用冠词。