写作指导
Notice
发布日期 : 2016-06-28浏览次数 : 来源 :
习作要求：
假如你是校广播站的播音员，请拟一份英语通知，给全校师生下通知。不少于70词。
学生习作：
May I have your attention, please? I have① a announcement to make. In order to help us learn more about the Internet, the Students’ Union is going to hold a lecture. Professor Zhang from the Computer Department at Nanjing University will give us a talk. The lecture will② hold on Wednesday, the tenth of October. It will begin at 4:30 pm in Room 302 of the library building.
That’s all. Thank you!
教师修改：
① a改为an。announcement是以元音音素开头的单词，应用an。
② hold改为be held。此处lecture和hold为被动关系，应用被动语态。
假如你是校广播站的播音员，请拟一份英语通知，给全校师生下通知。不少于70词。
学生习作：
Notice
Dear teachers and schoolmates,May I have your attention, please? I have① a announcement to make. In order to help us learn more about the Internet, the Students’ Union is going to hold a lecture. Professor Zhang from the Computer Department at Nanjing University will give us a talk. The lecture will② hold on Wednesday, the tenth of October. It will begin at 4:30 pm in Room 302 of the library building.
That’s all. Thank you!
教师修改：
① a改为an。announcement是以元音音素开头的单词，应用an。
② hold改为be held。此处lecture和hold为被动关系，应用被动语态。