My pleasant trip to Shaoxing

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　   假设你和家人刚刚进行了一次愉快的旅行。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍旅行经历。
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　　2. 个人感想；
　　3. 整体感受。
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增加细节；
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学生习作：
　A few days ago, I went to Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, with my family. It is truly a beautiful city. There, we made many wonderful memories.
　In the morning, we went to “Lu Xun’s Native Place”. There, we saw Lu Xun’s schoolhouse. This was where Lu Xun spent his childhood and drew inspiration for his writing. We also visited the Baicao Garden. He spent the happiest time of his life here. 
　Lu Xun is one of the writers I admire the most. I admire him because he was not only a writer, but also a great “fighter”. He used his pen to express the sentiments of every patriot. Shaoxing is also the hometown of many other famous people. I have learned a lot during this trip. It is a wonderful city, isn’t it?